I am a Year 7 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi,I'm Fraise from your class and I think you did well,but next time I think you should have use size 12 for your writing because you have different size in your sentences.
Hi Ila, There is some very interesting information on your plastic bags. Next time could you please say where you got the information from? What texts or videos you used. Is it not sad about the whales dying from the plastic that goes in the oceans. Something we can do something about. Keep sharing your learning on your blog.
Kia Ora its Kaiva your class mate I really like how you put yuor hard work in this I like how you put no colour.
ReplyDeleteHi,I'm Fraise from your class and I think you did well,but next time I think you should have use size 12 for your writing because you have different size in your sentences.
ReplyDeleteHi Ila,
ReplyDeleteThere is some very interesting information on your plastic bags. Next time could you please say where you got the information from? What texts or videos you used. Is it not sad about the whales dying from the plastic that goes in the oceans. Something we can do something about.
Keep sharing your learning on your blog.