I am a Year 7 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Ila, How amazing! I just really enjoyed listening to what you have found out about our very own planet Earth and other planets. I really commend you on screening your picture as well in your screencast. Well done! Good on you for presenting the information in your own words. You are getting really good at this. Ka Pai.
Kia ora Ila,
ReplyDeleteHow amazing! I just really enjoyed listening to what you have found out about our very own planet Earth and other planets. I really commend you on screening your picture as well in your screencast. Well done! Good on you for presenting the information in your own words. You are getting really good at this. Ka Pai.
Thank you for your comment i really appreciate the feed back.
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ReplyDeletehi Ila.
ReplyDeleteyour screencastify was really clearly and also how you spoke was good.