I am a Year 7 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
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ReplyDeleteHi Ila this is Neha and Mahana from your class. We like your writing but it was hard to read. Keep working hard and next maybe try copy pasting.
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really cool and keep up the work:)