I am a Year 7 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Ila this is Karson from Edmund Hillary School and I think your canoe story is really GOOD but I was reading and I saw a mistake and don't forget to prof read your story and that tells me that you didn't prof read it ok but other then that good job ✌👍✌.
Hi Ila this is Karson from Edmund Hillary School and I think your canoe story is really GOOD but I was reading and I saw a mistake and don't forget to prof read your story and that tells me that you didn't prof read it ok but other then that good job ✌👍✌.
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