I am a Year 7 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Ila, it's karson and the story that you wrote it was kind of tragic to hear about and also that was a good story but the killing parts was kind of creepy and other whys good story. NICE JOB.
Hi Ila, it's karson and the story that you wrote it was kind of tragic to hear about and also that was a good story but the killing parts was kind of creepy and other whys good story. NICE JOB.
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